I thought I’d share the start of a new tale. Would love some feedback.
“Spread your legs.”
Evie shuddered at the forcefulness of his voice and did as he asked.
As his gaze raked over her and lingered there, between her legs, she held her breath. It felt as if he was touching her.
He licked his lips and she swallowed the lump in her throat.
Her gaze met his and it scorched her to the core. His blue eyes were dark with desire. His look was predatory.
She hesitated, and he stood and moved closer. She spread her legs as wide as she possibly could.
His lips turned up in a smile and her heart fluttered.
When he took another step toward her, she felt the pulsating in her veins.
He knelt before her and his hands slid up her thighs, his fingers so close to her hot, wanting sex.